The Graduate Corrections

The Graduate Corrections

One man has recently graduated from a university. and he come back to home.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.

university. And

university and

university.  He

he come back

form

third person singular + base form +s/es

he comes back home.

After that , Benjamin go to Elaine's wedding and he run away with Elaine.

But she has affair with Benjamin.

Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine. So when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

Incorrect

When Elaine leaves,

He loves Elaine truly

Delete .

So during Elain’s wedding, Ben takes true love and runs away

Run away (I don’t understand with who)

Benjamin truly takes love and runs away.

l  After Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truly loves Elaine.  During Elaine’s wedding, Benjamin takes his true love and runs away.

 

So he nervous about his future.

He worries about his future.

He is nervous about his future.

 

Ben is timid, stupid person and Ben represents difficulties of a young adult.

Ben is timid and stupid person and Ben represents difficulty of young adult.

Ben is timid and stupid. Ben represents difficulty of a young adult.(same)

Ben is timid and stupid. Ben represents difficulties of young adult.(same)

Use ‘a/an’ or ‘the’ before the singular form of countable nouns.

Ben is a timid and stupid person.  He represents the difficulties of young adults.

Mrs. Robinson is selfish and greed person.

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greed person.

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greedy person.

Mrs Robinson represents American middle class to like pleasure of the moment.

Ben is a typical student in the early 20's appearance.

Ben : timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson : very very attractive, erotic

 

Ben is timid, shy and sometimes brave.

Mrs. Robinson is very, very attractive and erotic.

I think Ben shows us about 20's worries. This movie shows also what we have to do in the future.

In a word, very interesting. To me, the movie ‘The Graduate’ has fresh topic. Throughout the moive time, I watch the movie with concentration. And I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I. Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy. This movie gets good grade from film critic. The movie was pretty funny.

I think, if I were in Ben`s position, what would I do?

 Anne Bancroft who plays Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy.                                                    

It was a good movie except for one thing. I can't find the relevance of the title and the content.

 

 

 

I'm bored at first, but increasingly it caused tension in the movie. The film makes me know not human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

The film makes me know not only human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.