One of my Favorite Restaurants Corrections and Homework

One of my Favorite Restaurants Corrections

What items are on the menu?

 

 

 

There are many kinds of item on the menu. For example jajangmyean , jjangbbong, Tray jajangmyean others are on the menu.

There are many kinds of items on the menu. For example jajangmyean , jjangbbong, Tray jajangmyean and others are on the menu.

Jajangmyean      noodles with black bean sauce,  me too

Jjangbbong          noodles with ???, noodles with red pepper sauce, Spicy seafood noodle soup*

, Tray jajangmyean    noodles in black bean sauce served on a tray

 

My favorite restaurant is mom's touch in Koreatech.
There are so many menu.
My favorite food is 싸이burger.

There are so many items on the menu.

Mom's Touch near the front entrance of Koreatech

싸이burger    Psy burger

 

 

 

This is buffet restaurant. Menu has only one list.

There is a lot of food on the menu.
For example, grilled pork belly, steamed rice bowl, miso soup and many drinks.

It wraps up grind meat and some vegetables in dough like pizza’s dough but it is as small as palm’s size.

MacDonald is worldwide American restaurant. There are lots of menu.

Also It has different menus. For example Fried vegetable, noodles, some drinks etc. Many people are there. Why do I like this restaurants? Because It is my first restaurants with my girlfriend in Chun an. When I came to Chun an first time. I said to her "I want to eat korean fast food." She took me to there. And another reason is that I've been to many korean fast food, but 떡볶이나라 is the best , also quantity and quality are good value for money. So I like to go there.

I like Korean food. One of my favorite restaurants is located right here in Cheonan. It's called LA북창동순두부찌개. This restaurant's soft tofu stew is very delicious. On the menu, there are normal soft tofu stew, dumpling soft tofu stew, sea food soft tofu stew and so on. I like sea food soft tofu stew better than the others.
To get there: Take the 400 bus in the direction of Cheonan. Ride for 40 minutes. Get off at the Cheonan bus terminal stop. Walk about 50 meters. It's cross the Arario park. It is 2nd floor on a building. You can find it.

If you have a some time, I recommend that you go there.

On the menu there is just two selection. Cow sirloin and Cow sashimi.
There are many side dishes like raw garlics, onions and some fresh lettuce.

Actually, all of the food that Mad for Garlic serve has many garlic as its name by various recipe like boiled garlic or fry garlic.

Grilled Beef Tripe is made of intestines(?) of a cow.

[Correct]I like this restaurant because they serves Kimchi bean sprouts soup for [an] appetizer.

Last night

 

Last Night

 

Last night I had dinner with some friends of mine.  First we ate pork at a local restaurant.  Then we went to a friend’s house.  We listened to some music.  After we listened to music, we decided to go to Yawoori. 

                  We hung out in Yawoori for a while and then I felt tired.  I said goodbye to my friends before I got into a cab and went home.

Remember, use the simple past to tell about finished actions.
Pay attention to irregular simple past forms.
Use word that put events in order, such as first, after, then, before, as soon as, and next.

The Graduate Corrections

The Graduate Corrections

One man has recently graduated from a university. and he come back to home.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.

university. And

university and

university.  He

he come back

form

third person singular + base form +s/es

he comes back home.

After that , Benjamin go to Elaine's wedding and he run away with Elaine.

But she has affair with Benjamin.

Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truely loves Elaine. So when Elaine's wedding , Benjamin takes truley love, run away.

Incorrect

When Elaine leaves,

He loves Elaine truly

Delete .

So during Elain’s wedding, Ben takes true love and runs away

Run away (I don’t understand with who)

Benjamin truly takes love and runs away.

l  After Elaine leaves, Benjamin realizes that he truly loves Elaine.  During Elaine’s wedding, Benjamin takes his true love and runs away.

 

So he nervous about his future.

He worries about his future.

He is nervous about his future.

 

Ben is timid, stupid person and Ben represents difficulties of a young adult.

Ben is timid and stupid person and Ben represents difficulty of young adult.

Ben is timid and stupid. Ben represents difficulty of a young adult.(same)

Ben is timid and stupid. Ben represents difficulties of young adult.(same)

Use ‘a/an’ or ‘the’ before the singular form of countable nouns.

Ben is a timid and stupid person.  He represents the difficulties of young adults.

Mrs. Robinson is selfish and greed person.

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greed person.

Mrs. Robinson is a selfish and greedy person.

Mrs Robinson represents American middle class to like pleasure of the moment.

Ben is a typical student in the early 20's appearance.

Ben : timid, shy, sometimes brave

Robinson : very very attractive, erotic

 

Ben is timid, shy and sometimes brave.

Mrs. Robinson is very, very attractive and erotic.

I think Ben shows us about 20's worries. This movie shows also what we have to do in the future.

In a word, very interesting. To me, the movie ‘The Graduate’ has fresh topic. Throughout the moive time, I watch the movie with concentration. And I think if I were Ben`s position, how did I. Anne Bancroft who in charge of Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy. This movie gets good grade from film critic. The movie was pretty funny.

I think, if I were in Ben`s position, what would I do?

 Anne Bancroft who plays Mrs. Robinson is very charming and sexy.                                                    

It was a good movie except for one thing. I can't find the relevance of the title and the content.

 

 

 

I'm bored at first, but increasingly it caused tension in the movie. The film makes me know not human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

The film makes me know not only human nature and sexuality, but also real what love is.

One of my Favorite Restaurants

One of my favorite restaurants is located right here in Chungcheon Nam Do.  It’s called 꺼먹돼지.  The pork is excellent.  The owner of the restaurant raises the pigs on his farm which is located a few kilometers away from the restaurant.  He even grows the vegetables for the side dishes.  His wife’s kimchi is very spicy and a little sour.  The scallion kimchi is my favorite.  It’s a korean barbecue restaurant, so you cook the meat yourself over coals.  I think it’s fun to flip the meat over with a pair of tongs and to cut the meat into bite-sized pieces with a pair of scissors. I like to add a little bit of sea salt while the meat is cooking.  If you like, you can also grill onions, rice cake, and garlic while the meat is cooking.  When everything is ready, I like to wrap up a piece of pork, some grilled onions, a sliver of raw garlic, and some red pepper paste in a piece of fresh lettuce.  Mmmm…. Delicious!

 

 

To get there:  Take the 400 bus in the direction of Cheonan.  Ride for about 20 minutes.  Get off at the Dong Woo Apartments stop.  Walk East about 25 meters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is your favorite kind of food?

 

Where do you eat it?

 

What items are on the menu?

 

What is your favorite dish on the menu?

 

How can you get there from campus?

 

Write about your favorite restaurant.

 

The Graduate

The Graduate

 

Ben has recently graduated from a university.  T or F

 

During the day, Ben goes to many job interviews.  T or F

 

Ben has an affair with Mrs. Robinson.  T or F

 

Elaine is Mrs. Robinson’s younger sister.  T or F

 

Ben and Elaine eventually get married.  T or F

 

 

Describe the setting.

Describe two of the characters.

What do you think about this movie?

Lord of the Flies Corrections

Lord of the Flies

Corrections

 

1. Children are missing after plane accident. They hardly survive in uninhabited island. They are divided two groups. One is elected Ralph as leader, the other elected Jack as leader. They regularly collide over decisions. finally Jack's group kills Ralph's group except Ralph.

2. Ralph : Leadership , Equality , Peace , Nokill

 Jack : Cruel , Power , Murder , Desire to be recognized by children

3. I think the movie show human nature. Human have a lot of freedom, they erupt human nature. For example, At first Jack dosen't want kill friends. But finally Jack dosen't mind about it. So human has evil everyday. We must think about it.

 

1) Describe the setting.

A plane fell down. there are some children in plane. children were isolated in uninhabited island. they made two groups for survival. they came into conflict each other.

 

2) Describe two of the characters.

One character is Ralph. he is intelligent so he became a leader.

the other character is Jack. he is ambitious so he disappointed when Ralph became a leader. Later, Jack lead some children who support him.

 

 3) What do you think about this movie?

 I feel discomfort because I seem see dark side in human. this movie shows human nature. as time goes on, they reveal their true colors. for example. later, Jack committed a murder. he didn't feel of guilt. this movie made me bitter.

 

1) Describe the setting.

Flight accident is happen and childrens are isolated in island. And the island is an uninhabited island. And childrens make two group. One group's leader is Ralph and the other group's leader is Jack

 

 

 

2) Describe two of the characters.

Ralph try to suevive many children's. And peaceful leader. He have a positive mind.

I think Jack is a tyrant. he ignore Piggi. And he have a negitive mind. I think Jack's inside is shrouded in fear. But he didn't expresse his mind. And he act as strong.

 

3) What do you think about this movie?

I think this movie's meaning is people reveal brutality by fear. And fear make a Social cut - throat gangsik. And broke the rule, and don't judgement by rational.

 

 

 

Lord of the Flies

A plane crashes in the ocean.  The survivors, who are mostly school children of various ages, use a raft to reach an uninhabited island.  There are beaches and small hills on the island.  The shoreline is either beaches or rocks.  The island is covered with tropical trees, some of which are banana trees.  

Ralph becomes the leader of the group because he is the most responsible member.  He is kind to the younger children.  He is loyal and trustworthy.

Jack enjoys breaking the rules.  He is cruel – especially to Piggy. 

Piggy is overweight.  He is not in good shape.  He is, however, intelligent, rational, and calm.

I think this movie tells us a lot about the dangerous side of human nature.  It also shows that rules are an important part of society.

Lord of the Flies

1)  Describe the setting.

2)  Describe two of the characters.

3)  What do you think about this movie?