Week 1 Corrections

Evening class corrections.  Week  1

 

I'm freshman.

The singular form of a countable usually requires an Article (a, an, the).

I’m a freshman.

I have 4 family except me.

There are four people in my family.

My hobby is too many.

Hobby countable

Too many + countable nouns

Too much + noncountable nouns

Too + adjective

Negative meaning.  I can’t drink this coffee because it’s too hot.

Emphasis   so many +   Count,  so much + Noncount, so + adjective

I have so many hobbies.

My habit is biting my nails. So my nails so short.

                                                            Missing verb (are)

FANBOYS   for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so      Conjunctions connect two sentences.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.

My habit is biting my nails, so my nails are so short.

My family members are parents, younger sister and me.

I have parents and a younger sister.

I'm 21 years old, sophomore in Koreatech.

Run on sentence.  Two sentences joined together incorrectly.

I'm 21 years old and I’m a sophomore at Koreatech.

Missing subject.  Missing verb.

I'm smoker. I know smoking is harmful. But i can't stop because of toxication.

I'm a smoker.

I know smoking is harmful but I can't stop because I’m addicted to nicotine.

My family is consisted of me, mother, father, and one older brother.

I have parents and an (one) older brother.

I don't well english. Because i'm korean it’s no wonder. But i want to well english. So i will endeavor in jason's class and talk to many foreigners.

I don't well english.

Missing verb.     Word Order.      I don’t speak English well.

Capitalize languages.

Because I'm korean it’s no wonder but I want to speak English well so I will endeavor in Jason's class and talk to many foreigners.

I'm 21 years olds.  And I live in Cheonan.

I'm 21 years old  and I live in Cheonan.

i'm a sophmore in koreatech and my majors in mechatronics control system. therefore i interest in green enery.

I major in Mechatronics.

My major is Mechatronics.

I study Mechatronics.

I’m a sophomore at Koreatech and my major is Mechatronics Control System.  Therefore I’m interested in green energy.

 

 

 

 

 

Buyeo is located in the middle of Korea.  There is not very famous. But I'm very proud of my hometown.There is very important place in history. There was a capital of Bakjae. There is so many tourist attraction.

There – I live there.    Location

There is + singular count noun, noncount noun.          Existence.

There are + plural count noun.                                        Existence.

There is not very famous.      Buyeo is not very famous.

There is very important place in history.      It is a very important place in history.

There was a capital of Bakjae.            The capital of BaekJae was there.

There is so many tourist attraction.

Form.  There are so many tourist attractions.

 

I’m from the south korea. I grew up in a state called Gwangju.

The United States, The Philippines, The United Kingdom, The Czech Republic

I’m from South Korea.  

I grew up in a state called Gwangju.

Wrong word.  State.

Correct word.  City.

I'm excited to hear this class.

Wrong word.     Hear.

Correct.     Take, participate in, attend

Gwangju is famous of delicious dishes.

Wrong word. Of.

Correct word. For.

 

 

I`m very happy to meet all of you and I wanna be with you closely.

Wrong word.  To be with someone = to have a romantic relationship with someone

Correct word.  To be close with someone = to be good friends

Rice is mainly eaten in the cafeteria.

Wrong word   rice

Correct word   meals ie breakfast, lunch, dinner

I mainly eat my meals in the cafeteria.

Of course I played with them soccer, football and so on.

Word order

Of course I played soccer, football, and so on with them.

Let's get along with together this semester.

To get along together

To get along with each other

This semester I live in dormitory Hanul.

Word order

Hanul dormitory

I grew up in Cheonan, Cheonan spent all of my school days.

I grew up in Cheonan (and) (so) I spent all of my school days in Cheonan.

Summer vacation is approaching the future, I plan to go on a trip with friends.

Summer vacation is approaching and I plan to go on a trip with friends.

I'm not good at English. so I'm afraid english but well I want to english.

I'm not good at English so I'm afraid of English but I want to speak English well.

 

 

 

Above all, Byungcheon doesn't have anything to play with, so I can't tell you about it.  Though I can't go outside to play, I'm fine that I'm making friends here.

Wrong word    play

Correct word       to hang out,   to hang out with someone  =   to spend free time with friends

Here is a great place to live because as you know people are kindness and mindful.

Wrong form   kindness noun

Correct     kind      adjective

I'm pleased you are my professor and expect next monday.

Wrong word       expect

Correct      to look forward to

I'm pleased you are my professor and I’m looking forward to next Monday.

If you want to see my play come to our performance

Wrong word               my play

Correct            me play the guitar